Thursday, December 16, 2010

Commas in a Series Sentences

We practiced writing sentences using commas in a series. The students wrote about the things they would like to do over Christmas vacation.

Collin: On vacation, I would like to play in the snow, watch movies, and wake up early on Christmas.

JaShon: On winter break, I want to sled, snowboard, play Wii, play PSP, go to my friend's house, sleep, and go to bed.

Ava: Over break, I want to sled, play with my Christmas toys, wake up at 8 on Christmas, and rest.

Sabine: I would like to go sledding, watch movies, eat my gingerbread house, and have a nice dinner for Christmas break.

Josie: Over Christmas break I want to have a healthy family, open presents, sleep, play with the cat, and eat a lot.

Madi: I want to sled, rest, open my Christmas presents, wake up early, and have a good Christmas.

Abby: Over Christmas break, I am going to get gifts, celebrate Christmas, go to Tennessee, stay in a cabin in the Smoky Mountains, and go to a wedding.

Emma: For Christmas break I want to have a nice Christmas with my uncle, go sledding, go to my grandma and grandpa's house, watch movies, and have a great Christmas break.

Ian: For vacation, I will go to my grandma's on Friday, go celebrate Christmas with my aunt and uncle on Saturday, and go home on Sunday.

Julia: Over Christmas break, I would like to ski, make snowmen, make snowballs, build snow forts, drink hot cocoa, and sing Christmas carols!

Sam: I want to sled, open presents, and play over break.

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