Thursday, December 1, 2011

Persuasive Writing

We began working on persuasive writing this week. We read the book I Wanna Iguana by Karen Kaufman Orloff and wrote letters to our parents trying to convince them to get us the pet we want.

Dear Mom,
I want you to let me have a Meal-worm for a pet. First, I promise to feed him every day. Next, I promise to make sure he doesn't get lost. Another reason you should let me is because they  are very cute. Lastly, he would make a great friend.
Love your lonely son,
Conner

Dear Grandma,
May I please have a baby penguin because I will DIE with out one. There so soft and cuddly and sweet.
Love your begging sweetheart,
Abby
P.S. I am old enough to have it!

Dear Mom,
I want you to let me have a kitten for a pet. First, you can pick him out. Second, he won't shed! I will clean the litter box and make sure it doesn't smell. I will pay for the food with my allowance. I will help pay for him. Next, I will buy it a cage. Another reason why you should let me have a kitten is you won't get cat feelings because the kitten could be snuggling with you in your lap. I will share my Ipod with Max just for the kitten. I am old enough to have a kitten. I can pay for the cat sitter while we are on vacation. I will feed the kitten. I will pay for the kitten to get declawed. I will buy it toys. He won't wake everyone because  he could share a room with me. His food and water can go in the basement.
Love your lonely daughter,
Josie 

Dear Mom and Dad,
I want you to let me have a Great White Shark for a pet. First, I will feed it a seal everyday. Next, I will train him to pick up Walt's poop. Another reason you should let me is I will pay for his food with my allowance. Lastly, I promise I will take care of him. I REALLY WANT HIM FOR A PET!!
Love your lonely daughter,
Paige

Dear Mom and Dad,
I want you to let me have some more chickens. I promise I will take care of him or she. Oh no I am starting to cry, what no I am not yes I am no I am not WAAAAA (sniff) (sniff). Can I please (whispering) I hope I can I hope I can. If you guys give me one I will squeeze you as hard as I can.
Love your sad son,
Lucas

Dear Mom,
I want you to let me have a Saber Tooth Tiger for a pet. It would make a great protection. I will feed it every day. I will train it once a day to do tricks and I will play with it. I will get it a toy like a meat toy and I want it please.
Love your crazy son,
Jack

Dear Mom and Dad,
This is why I should have a puppy. First, I will feed it water and food everyday and play with toys that means I will walk it everyday. On Monday, Tuesday, and Sunday's. Next, I will train my pet all by myself. Another reason they are very cute and last I will clean it 5 times a week.
Love you need a pet daughter,
Izzy

Dear Mom, I need a baby Arctic Fox! I will DIE with out one!! I know it is illegal to own one but I NEED one!! They are so cute and cuddly, fun and active!! I need a new friend!!
Love your begging sweetheart,
Dawson

Dear Dad,
I want you to let me have a Komodo Dragon for a pet. First, I will buy him a giant cage with my allowance. Next, I will train it to protect us and I will buy it food with my allowance. Another reason you should let me us I will make sure it is healthy and nice. Lastly, I will DIE without one!!
Your lonely son,
Solon

Dear Dad,
A hamster is a perfect pet for me because first I would clean his cage when it got messy. I would do this even before I play with my friends. Next, I will refill his water and pay for his food with my allowance. Another reason you should let me have a hamster is cause there cute and quiet and I'll pay for his toys so he can  have fun. Lastly, I will clean and groom him  and teach him tricks.
Love your hopeful, lonely and responsible daughter,
Magdalen

Dear Mom,
I want you to get me a Mushie Monster for a pet. First, I 'll train it to change diapers because I know you don't like changing diapers. I'll buy it clothing with my own allowance when I get some. Next, I'll feed it everyday. I'll groom and clean it 4 hours everyday. They are really really quite just please let me have one. I will celebrate it's birthday and it will make great protection for the whole family. I'll buy it toys, I will die without one.
Love your in need daughter,
Ellie

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